***************************************************************** W R I T I N G W O R L D A World of Writing Information - For Writers Around the World http://www.writing-world.com Issue 9:08 7,761 subscribers April 16, 2009 ***************************************************************** SPECIAL NOTICE: Please DO NOT REPLY to this e-mail; any messages sent in reply to the newsletter are deleted. See the bottom of this newsletter for information on how to subscribe, unsubscribe, or contact the editors. ***************************************************************** IN THIS ISSUE: ================================================================= THE NEWSLETTER EDITOR'S DESK, by Dawn Copeman THE WRITING DESK, by Moira Allen NEWS FROM THE WORLD OF WRITING FEATURE: Lateral Thinking for Writers, by Ahmed A. Khan THE WRITE SITES -- Online Resources for Writers REVIEW OF WRITER'S MARKET UK 2010, by Dawn Copeman WRITING CONTESTS WITH NO ENTRY FEES The Author's Bookshelf ***************************************************************** EARN AN MFA IN WRITING through the brief-residency program at Spalding University in Louisville, KY. Call (800) 896-8941x2423 or email mfa"at"spalding.edu and request brochure FA90. For more info: http://www.spalding.edu/mfa ***************************************************************** WRITERSCOLLEGE.COM has 57 online courses. Prices are low. If you can reach our web site, you can take our courses. http://www.WritersCollege.com ***************************************************************** ACHIEVE YOUR WRITING DREAM. Train with an experienced professional author. Learn how to create manuscripts that sell. 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Statistics will show you how your writing is doing. http://www.fanstory.com/index1.jsp?at=38 ***************************************************************** FROM THE NEWSLETTER EDITOR'S DESK ================================================================ The Incurable Itch ------------------- I have an incurable itch, and I bet you have too. "An incurable itch for scribbling takes possession of many, and grows inveterate in their insane breasts." So wrote Juvenal in his Satires. I don't mind this itch; in fact, I love it. I wouldn't be happy if I couldn't write. But lately I have had a few problems with it. I find that having had a block recently that self-doubt is creeping in. And as Sylvia Plath put it "The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt." I start to write something, I delete it all and start again, delete that, stare into space, start, stop, and then go and clean the kitchen floor. Yes, the floor needed cleaning, but this isn't helping my productivity and as a copy writer, I get paid by results, not for having a clean floor! The way to deal with the itch is not to ignore it, but to meet it head on and embrace it. Joseph Heller said: "every writer I know has trouble writing," but if I don't write at all, then I can't call myself a writer. So now I'm back to writing something, ignoring the inner critic, leaving it alone for a few days, then reading and re-writing it. I'm also now employing what I call the Mark Twain method, as he put it: "The time to begin writing an article is when you have finished it to your satisfaction. By that time you begin to clearly and logically perceive what it is you really want to say." With Twain's help, I'm once again enjoying my itch. But other friends of mine are having problems with their itches too. They are working longer and longer hours in their day job just to hang on to it. Others have lost regular markets due to magazines closing. It could be a hard time to have the itch, OR it could be a great way to think about how to use it. As Moira told me, "Even the worst things that happen can be used in your writing. Nothing, no experience should be wasted." And, on reflection, I think this is true. As writers, no matter how tired we are, how busy we are or what dreadful things we are experiencing, we should take the time to scratch our itch and get things written down. Then, when we have more time we can make use of our noted down experiences, our feelings at the time, the events we've recorded and use them in our writing. "It is necessary to write, if the days are not to slip emptily by. How else, indeed, to clap the net over the butterfly of the moment? For the moment passes, it is forgotten; the mood is gone; life itself is gone. That is where the writer scores over his fellows: he catches the changes of his mind on the hop." - Vita Sackville-West. Embrace your itch. Use it. We are lucky to have it. -- Dawn Copeman, Newsletter Editor ***************************************************************** CHILDREN'S WRITERS COMPETITIVE EDGE. Monthly newsletter of editors' current wants and needs - up to 50 each month. Plus market studies and genre analyses loaded with editors' tips and insights into subjects and writing styles they're looking for right now. Get a free issue and see for yourself. http://www.thechildrenswriter.com/M1713 ***************************************************************** CROSSxCHECKING: Learn what you do wrong, and what you do right. Critiques - writing exercises - line/copyedits - formatting. Mention THIS AD for a special introductory offer: http://crossxchecking.blogspot.com ***************************************************************** THE WRITING DESK, Over Editing - by Moira Allen ================================================================= Q: Is it an editor's role to completely rewrite your work in his style? -------------------------------------------------------------------- I have been involved with a writing group and working with the editor, and founder, of such group. He seems to have a habit of completely re-writing my work to suit his own style, and seems to think that the only way of adding realism to work is to use language which I deem inappropriate. I am a Christian, that reads both Christian and secular material, and choose not to use certain things in my writing. Is it an editor's job to twist things to his own style while ignoring the style of the author? A: I'm not clear on the circumstances in which this editor is changing your work. Is this in the context of the writing group itself? If so, I can't imagine under what circumstances the editor should have any opportunity to "rewrite" your material, or feel that he has the right to do so. In a writing group, the editor has the option of volunteering his opinions on how you might best rewrite your material -- opinions that you are free to ignore. No more than that. The only circumstance in which an editor has the "right" to rewrite someone's material, and that right is limited, is when you have submitted it for publication. However, here the matter depends on what you are submitting, and where, and the nature of the rewrite. If, for example, you submit a nonfiction article for publication, an editor has the right to rewrite it for clarity, style, and grammatical accuracy. An editor may also make cuts to an article for space considerations. However, an editor generally may not add to an article (i.e., put in material that wasn't already there), or make cuts that would change the meaning of the article. It's also not considered acceptable to rewrite an article so completely that the author's original style has vanished, though some editors do so anyway. (If the article was that bad, the editor should not have accepted it or should have sent it back for a revision.) You're also talking about fiction. Under no circumstances would an editor rewrite a piece of fiction to reflect his style or preferences. If a piece of fiction needs significant rewriting, it goes back to the author or is simply not accepted. The only editing generally done to fiction is copyediting -- correcting grammar, spelling, etc. In a writing group, people express their opinions. Members are free to accept or reject those opinions. It is generally understood that opinions are just that -- not "absolute truth". One person may choose to write with graphic realism; another may prefer not to. Anyone who has looked at the market at all will realize that books of all types exist -- some are graphic and "realistic" and gritty and loaded with cuss words and descriptions, while others prefer not to go in that direction. Both kinds of books sell. (Your editor apparently doesn't realize that not only do some folks prefer not to write certain things, some folks also prefer not to read them.) If an individual is trying to tell people in a writing group "how to write," or impose his writing style on others by rewriting the work of other members, this person has a serious misunderstanding of how a writing group is supposed to work. A writing group is not a place where everyone else brings their work to the "head" of the group to be "rewritten" by him, according to his superior knowledge. If that's the way your group is functioning, my advice would be to get out and find another. (I would bet a lot of your other members feel the same way -- you might consider spinning off another group that is more cooperative and group-oriented, or, consider voting in a new "leader.") Copyright (c) 2009 Moira Allen ***************************************************************** WRITE MORE, WRITE BETTER by mastering the psychology of writing as well as the craft. Jurgen Wolff's book, "Your Writing Coach" (Nicholas Brealey Publishing) takes you from idea through to publication. Get it at Amazon, B&N or your local bookstore. For more information, go to http://www.yourwritingcoach.com ***************************************************************** NEWS FROM THE WORLD OF WRITING ================================================================= Big Brother has arrived in the UK ----------------------------------- Details of every website visited and every email sent and received in the UK will now be kept by Internet Service Providers for a whole year under new legislation which came into effect on the 6th April. The European Union Legislation now in force across the whole of Europe is seen by many as an unparalleled attack on privacy. For more on this story visit: http://tinyurl.com/det39d Writers Beware Site attacked by hackers --------------------------------------- The Science Fiction Writers of America (SFWA) site Writers Beware was maliciously targeted by hackers who used it to send a Trojan virus to visitors of the site. The affected pages have now been cleaned up but this is a timely reminder to all of us to ensure our computer firewalls and virus protections are kept up to date. For more on this story visit: http://www.sfcrowsnest.com/news/arc/2009/nz13798.php New Author up for two Orange Awards ----------------------------------- Here is yet another tale to inspire us to keep going. Ann Weisgarber's tale of a black pregnant woman in Dakota in 1917 was dismissed by US publishers as being 'too quiet' so she tried to have it published in the UK instead. Her novel, "The Personal History of Rachel DuPree", was finally published by Macmillan's New Writing imprint and has now been short-listed for not only the Orange Award for New Writers, but also for the main Orange Prize for Fiction. The award will be made on the 3rd June. For more on this story visit: http://tinyurl.com/dlebex ***************************************************************** KETCH PUBLISHING - Custom Book Publishing Services $595 Publishing Fee - 25 free books - (175 pgs. or less) AUTHOR WEB SITES - Only $5 a month! Custom Web Site Design for $125 (up to 6 pages) http://www.KetchPublishing.com ***************************************************************** FEATURE: Lateral Thinking for Writers ================================================================= by Ahmed A. Khan When Edward de Bono first propounded the principles of lateral thinking, it is quite possible that even he never dreamed of the various fields in which these principles could be and would be applied. Creative writing, and particularly fiction writing, is one off beat field where some techniques of lateral thinking can be usefully applied. From my personal experience, I can state that there are three most useful lateral thinking techniques from the point of view of a writer. I have named them the hyper jump, the random stimulation, and the reversal. Of these three techniques, the reversal method is the easiest to use. Take an accepted fact, turn it on its head, then justify the reversed fact. For example, it is an accepted fact that man descended from apes. Now reverse it. You have the premise that apes descended from man. At this point, there are two ways to develop the story. Either you begin with the above stated premise and use your story to prove its truth, or you forget about proving anything and simply construct your story in such a way that the events in the story lead to the conclusion that apes did descend from man. I used this idea in a short-story called "Ancestor". The story has been published in GateWay S-F. Writers have been using this writing technique long before the advent of lateral thinking and long before the technique was named. One of the earliest examples of the application of reversal technique in English literature is probably H.G. Wells' famous story, "The Country of the Blind." Here, Wells takes the age old adage that in the land of the blind, even a one-eyed person would be king, upends it and shows us that, on the contrary, a person with sight would be useless in the country of the blind. It is interesting to note that it was this technique that -- in the middle of the twentieth century -- changed a small publishing concern into a multi-million-dollar empire. Prior to 1961, it was assumed in the comics industry that having super powers is a great thing. Then along came Stan Lee and started producing comics (Fantastic Four, Spider Man, Incredible Hulk) that showed that super powers can bring more trouble than good. People liked this new, unexpected angle, and Marvel Comics shot to fame. Let me now come to the second lateral thinking technique: the "hyper jump." In this technique, the writer starts by assuming a totally unbelievable, improbable and almost impossible condition, then proceeds to show that such a condition is after all possible. For example, ask yourself a question: Why did we stop manned rocket flights to moon? Jump to a wild conclusion: Because the moon, in actual fact, turned into green cheese. Too wild? Well, John Brunner did write a story wherein the moon turned into green cheese -- and it was not a fantasy, but was a science fiction story. At this point it is fairly obvious that both these techniques are more useful in generation of story ideas than as plot development devices. More suited for use in plot development is the technique of random stimulation. The idea is to take a topic or theme. Then randomly pick a couple of other words or concepts and strain your imaginative powers in trying to relate these random words or concepts to your theme. This technique can be used to generate story ideas as well to develop the plot of an ongoing story. The writing prompts are the most common form of applying this technique but sometimes just the prompts are not enough. Not every writer (with the possible exception of Harlan Ellison) has the facility to write a story at the drop of the proverbial hat. Sometimes the stimulation needs to come from more than one source. A better way of generating stories using random stimulation is described below. Choose a key word from the story idea or the plot that you want to develop. Take a dictionary, open it at random and make note of the first word that you spot on the page. Repeat the procedure to get a second random word. Now rack your brains to come up with some common plot threads or backgrounds that could link the two random words with your key word. You would be surprised at the number of truly innovative ideas that you can generate this way if you really dig in. As an illustration of story idea generation using random stimulation, take "success" as your key word, i.e. you plan to write a story that deals with some aspect of success. Let your random words be "butterfly" and "library." See what scheme you can come up with that could link these words with your key word. Try word associations: library - knowledge; butterfly - metamorphosis. There is a girl who works in the library. She is drab and homely and laid back. She decides to change herself but doesn't know how. She thinks of the library where she works. Here is a reservoir of knowledge, an easily accessible resource. She turns to books on self-improvement topics, reads them, follows the instructions and starts to change for the better. So here is your basic story idea, generated out of a theme and two random words. Let us now move to plot development. You go for random stimulation again. You open the dictionary at random and the first word you see is "elephant." Now what has elephant got to do with a girl who is working in a library? Let us try word associations: elephant - elephantiasis - disease. Yes, it may be possible to relate disease to your heroine. Does she fall ill? Let us say she fakes illness. Now why would she do that? Maybe to test someone. Who? Well, with her improved personality, she was able to make friends with a few people. Two of them -- boys -- have come quite close to her. Both have proposed to her and she cannot decide between them. Well, why not test their mettle, the truth of their feelings for her, by faking some nerve wracking sickness and waiting to see who provided her with support and solace in such a condition? Thus progresses the plot. Three cheers for lateral thinking. >>--------------------------------------------------<< Copyright (c) 2009 by Ahmed A. Khan Ahmed A. Khan is an IT professional who is infected with the writing bug. He was born in India but now lives in Canada and has had nonfiction articles and short stories published in magazines across the world. His work has appeared in Science Today and Femina in India, Kuwait Times, Arab Times, Murderous Intent, Realms, Imelod, Anotherealm, AlienQ, Pif, Cyber Oasis, GateWay S-F, Jackhammer, Millennium SF, Strange Horizons, The Phone Book etc. Visit his blog and get more information about his works at http://www.angelfire.com/zine2/fictiononline/ For more information on generating story ideas visit: http://www.writing-world.com/fiction/giles.shtml **************************************************************** WORLDWIDE FREELANCE WRITER - You can download a free list of writing markets if you subscribe this week. Discover almost 2,000 writing markets from USA, Canada, UK, Europe, Australasia. http://www.worldwidefreelance.com **************************************************************** THE WRITE SITES ================================================================= EditAvenue.com -------------- This site is basically a clearing house for editors. You know the routine: you sign up, people can hire you and if they do, you pay fees to the site. It does, however, also have a fantastic selection of writing tips covering proofreading, story development and writing with confidence. This site is a MUST for anyone wanting to improve their writing. http://www.editavenue.com/writing_tips_articles_1.asp Swirl and Swing --------------- This is a private peer critique group that is centered around a weekly assignment. It welcomes serious writers of all types with a particular interest in poets. http://www.swirlandswinginformation.wordpress.com The Playwriting Seminars ------------------------ This is an informative site for anyone who has ever wanted to write scripts, screenplays or normal plays. It covers all aspects of playwriting and is a treasure trove of information. http://www.vcu.edu/arts/playwriting/seminar.html **************************************************************** CAN'T GET PUBLISHED? Be a Well-Fed Self-Publisher and make a living! Control the process and timetable. Keep the rights AND most of the profits. Here's the step-by-step blueprint used to create a full-time living from ONE book! By the award-winning author of The Well-Fed Writer. http://www.wellfedsp.com ***************************************************************** WRITER'S MARKET UK 2010 - A REVIEW, by Dawn Copeman ================================================================= With the current economic climate market guides have become even more of a necessity to the freelance writer. Previously, we might only have used such guides when we were starting out, (most new writers I know buy one as a matter of course -- how else are they going to find outlets for their writing?) But then we develop our contacts, we develop our columns, we have regular work with editors and quite often, we stop looking for other outlets for our work. Not any more. Now, with magazines closing and with staff writers being made redundant, the market guide is suddenly becoming popular with all writers again. There are other market guides out there, but once again Writer's Market UK 2010 has knocked them into a corner. Not only is it fully updated with over 4,500 listings (more than any other UK guide) but unlike the other UK guides it also comes complete with free membership of its daily updated website, to give you up-to-the-minute information about potential markets for your work. Plus it also has more articles on the craft of writing than any other market guide. What's more, unlike other guides, these articles aren't all aimed at the complete beginner. Writer's Market UK realizes that many of us more experienced writers will now be looking at expanding our repertoire and has provided articles to help us do just this. The 24 articles in this edition cover everything from how to write, to grants for writers, to writing erotica, writing screenplays, memoirs, travel writing, a review of courses and books on writing, contracts and a comprehensive overview of the publishing process as well as a look at the state of the UK book trade. As well as listings for a wide variety of publishers across the UK, the guide also has detailed listings for broadcasters, theatre companies, agents and consultancies as well as information on grants, competitions, festivals, conferences, writers' groups and a very handy resources section. Plus, in line with the current economic climate, the price has been reduced too, to just £12.99. Out of all the market guides available in the UK or for the UK market, this one is, once again, the best. If you do want to make money from your writing this year, this could be the best investment you could make. http://www.writersmarket.co.uk ***************************************************************** WRITING CONTESTS ================================================================= This section lists contests that charge no entry fees. Unless otherwise indicated, competitions are open to all adult writers. For a guide to more than 1000 writing contests throughout the world, see Moira Allen's book, "Writing to Win: The Colossal Guide to Writing Contests" (http://www.writing-world.com/bookstore/index.shtml). CRUCIBLE FICTION AND POETRY CONTEST ----------------------------------- DEADLINE: May 1, 2009 GENRE: Poetry and Short Stories DETAILS: 1 - 5 poems, fiction: 1 story, 8000 words max. PRIZE $150 in each category URL: http://www.barton.edu/academics/english/crucible.htm COMMONWEALTH SHORT STORY COMPETITION ------------------------------------ DEADLINE: May 11, 2009 GENRE: Short Stories OPEN TO: British Commonwealth citizens. DETAILS: Submit 1 - 3 short stories, 600 words max apiece with 4 - 5 minutes performance time for each story. PRIZE: £2000 and radio broadcast of story, regional prizes of £500. URL: http://www.cba.org.uk/index.php BRADT TRAVEL WRITING CONTEST ---------------------------- DEADLINE: May 15, 2009 GENRE: Nonfiction DETAILS: 800 word max travel article. Special prize for writers who have not been published before. PRIZE: Commissioned and paid for article by UK newspaper/place on a travel writing course/holiday for two in Columbia. URL: http://www.bradt-travelguides.com/infopage.asp?PageID=101 BLACK ORCHID NOVELLA AWARD -------------------------- DEADLINE: May 31, 2009 GENRE: Novella length short fiction. DETAILS: Novellas from 15,000 to 20,000 words that conform to the tradition of the Nero Wolfe series. Stories must contain no overt sex or violence or include characters from the original series. View website for detailed guidelines. PRIZE: $1000 and publication in Alfred Hitchcock Magazine URL: http://tinyurl.com/yd6oaz ROBERT TRAVER AWARD ------------------- DEADLINE: June 1, 2009 GENRE: Nonfiction/Short Stories DETAILS: Essays or short stories of up to 3,500 words demonstrating a love of fly-fishing. PRIZE: $2,500 and possible publication. 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