Five Tips to Writing Great Subheads
by Kristina Springer
Skim through a nonfiction article online or in a magazine and
you'll likely notice that a major difference between nonfiction
writing and other types of writing, such as academic and
creative, is the inclusion of subheads. When writing nonfiction
articles, it is good practice to break big chunks of text into
smaller, more digestible chunks by inserting good, clear
subheads. Many readers skim through articles to see what piques
their interest. Subheads can quickly tell your reader what you
will discuss in each section and help readers decide whether they
want to read all or part of your article. Other readers are just
looking for an answer in a hurry (for example, how do I get my
baby on a set feeding schedule?) and will likely just skim your
document to find what they need. Providing good, clear subheads
will help your reader get the information they are looking for
fast. Here are five quick tips for writing great subheads:
Make Your Subheads Complete
Your reader should be able to tell exactly what each section is
about just from reading its subhead. Your subheads should be as
clear and concise as possible so that there is no question in
your reader's mind as to a section's content. For example, a
subhead like "Migraines" is vague. Your reader might ask himself,
"What about migraines?" A more exact subhead is needed. A subhead
like "Dealing with Severe Migraines" is appropriate. This tells
the reader exactly what will be discussed in that section.
Use Subheads Frequently
If you find that you've gone over a page without a break in text,
then you've probably gone too long without a subhead. Look over
what you wrote. Can it be broken into two sections? Did you
perhaps talk about the benefits and risks of taking aspirin daily
on the same page? If so, split up the information and place the
benefits information under one subhead, and the risks information
under another. This will save your reader time by allowing him to
go right to the information he is interested in.
Make Your Subheads Active
With a lot of nonfiction articles, especially how-to articles,
you are asking your readers to do something, to perform some kind
of action. Because of this, it makes sense to start your subheads
with an action verb. For example, when writing a piece on how to
perform various actions using Microsoft Word, I would change this
vague group of subheads:
New Documents
Tables
Pictures
to a clearer group of subheads that open with an action verb:
Opening a New Word Document
Inserting a Table
Inserting a Picture
Use More than One Level of Detail
If you have first-level subheads throughout your document, then
you are off to a good start. Even better, however, is to add
another level of detail: second-level subheads. It's a busy world
and if you can help your reader pinpoint what she is looking for
in a hurry, she'll thank you. For example, if you have a subhead
that says:
Setting Up an Exercise Program
you can break it down further by adding these second-level subheads:
- Setting Up an Exercise Program
- Choose a Time to Exercise
- Select the Type of Exercise
- Gather your Workout Gear
Make Your Subheads Parallel
Parallelism between your subheads is key to producing a
professional piece of writing. Creating unparallel subheads is a
mistake amateurs quite frequently make in their writing. Take a
look at this group of subheads from an article on how to find a
literary agent:
Talk to Other Authors
How Do I Search Online?
Writer's Conferences
Read these subheads in succession and you can probably hear that
the flow is off. The first subhead begins with a verb. The second
subhead asks a question. The third subhead is a noun. To make
these parallel, you need to choose one style and carry it out for
the entire grouping of subheads at that same level. By beginning
each subhead with a verb, I've now made these subheads parallel:
Talk to Other Authors
Search Online
Attend Writer's Conferences
Any of the styles of subhead are fine, just as long as you carry
it out for the entire level. If you want your first-level
subheads to ask a question, then all of your first-level subheads
should ask a question. Second-level subheads under each group of
first-level subheads must also be parallel with each other but do
not need to be parallel with the first level.
When writing nonfiction articles, you want to make your writing
as easy to digest as possible for your readers. Today's readers
live fast-paced lives and want to get the information that they
seek fast. One way of making your writing easier for your reader
to use is to break it up into chunks with the use of subheads.
Keep these five tips in mind when working on your next article
and you'll create subheads like a pro!
Copyright © 2005 Kristina Springer
Kristina Springer is a freelance writer and writing instructor at
DePaul University in Chicago, IL, where she received a Master of
Arts in Writing. Currently, she is working on a young ydult
fiction novel as well as a number of nonfiction articles. She
lives in a west suburb of Chicago with her husband, Athens, and
children Teegan and Maya. Visit her web site at
http://www.KristinaSpringer.com.
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